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Angel O' sofar away

Why did you forsake your blessed way

When is it you fell from grace

Or were you just portraying another face

Is this the real hidden deep inside

Why blame yourself for all who died

What is it that ripped you apart

What made you betray the one you served

Why have you chosen the path of the damned

All this I ask you and so you reply...

Why can't you see that you'ree just like me

With your soul torn between...
©2005-2009 ~bakasanx
:iconbakasanx:

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just that

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:icon0jellybean0:
is this about MiMi?its good

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u are going to have many loves in ur life...but u are only going to have one love of life


:raincloud: :hump: :matrixfight: ~J-me~ :poke: :ninjaplot: :analprobe:
:iconghostflowermask:
This is beautiful! it flows nicely, and the meaning is just so.. fitting to the title.
brilliant!

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~ghost
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~Eager Lovesick Lullaby
:iconbakasanx:
hehehe thankies ghosty i luv ya! ^~^ :biggrin:

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"Death before Dishonor"

-Matte :mangapunksai: :ninjabattle:
:iconbakasanx:
no its not why would you think that my love? but thx none the less as far as what its about i dunno really i just started writing really without a topic and thats what came to be

--
"Death before Dishonor"

-Matte :mangapunksai: :ninjabattle:
:icon0jellybean0:
cool beans

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u are going to have many loves in ur life...but u are only going to have one love of life


:raincloud: :hump: :matrixfight: ~J-me~ :poke: :ninjaplot: :analprobe:
:icontruebornbuddha:
it's good bro, i like the wording

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"Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in rising everytime we fall"

Buddha
:iconbakasanx:
hehehe thx jackass readin my message as i type it what an ass

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"Death before Dishonor"

-Matte :mangapunksai: :ninjabattle:
:iconmageshope:
Pretty words, for sure. Sad, so very heaven-bound but also very down-to-earth....


My only problem (other than my usual "OMG spelling issues!") would be fourth line. Doesn't seem to flow greatly with the rest of the piece.

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...the seeds of my insanity spread...
:iconbakasanx:
thx ^~^

--
"Death before Dishonor"

-Matte :mangapunksai: :ninjabattle:

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